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I created my second short film and I need honest feedback from people that are zombie fans. The title of the film is Zombie Party, which we shot last summer and are almost finished editing. The short film is about a sleep-deprived, over-caffeinated, high school student pulling his third all-nighter for the next day’s S.A.T. While under the influence of pills and caffeinated drinks he drives to a party; Zombie chaos occurs—he slays zombies, he hears the siren of police cars, what is he to do; is it real or is it a drug induced hallucination?

Please do not hold back punches with your review/comments; be as critical and detailed as possible. Please DO NOT ASSUME that we are aware of something that needs to be fixed. We will add some sound fx during the party with some background screams/crying etc. I would like to have a finished product that is film festival worthy. All the music was produced/recorded by a friend for the film.

A few questions:
Is the title sequence to cheesy?
What do you think of the twist at the end?
Do you think this is Film Festival worthy? If so, any recommendations?

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z2Zvs9t9a5c&feature

Thanks for your time,
Bruce Downs
http://www.facebook.com/mile29films

I created my second short film and I need honest feedback from people that are zombie fans. The title of the film is Zombie Party, which we shot last summer and are almost finished editing. The short film is about a sleep-deprived, over-caffeinated, high school student pulling his third all-nighter for the next day’s S.A.T. While under the influence of pills and caffeinated drinks he drives to a party; Zombie chaos occurs—he slays zombies, he hears the siren of police cars, what is he to do; is it real or is it a drug induced hallucination?

Please do not hold back punches with your review/comments; be as critical and detailed as possible. Please DO NOT ASSUME that we are aware of something that needs to be fixed. We will add some sound fx during the party with some background screams/crying etc. I would like to have a finished product that is film festival worthy. All the music was produced/recorded by a friend for the film.

A few questions:
Is the title sequence to cheesy?
What do you think of the twist at the end?
Do you think this is Film Festival worthy? If so, any recommendations?

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z2Zvs9t9a5c&feature

Thanks for your time,
Bruce Downs
http://www.facebook.com/mile29films